Hi Brennan, Charlotte here from your school and class. This is a very eye catching Blog Post. It made me feel like I was you in the game thats how real it felt. How do you feel that you were the winner? There is nothing you need to work on. Keep up the good work. -Charlotte
Kia Ora Brennan. Emil here for T1! I really enjoyed reading all about this game of hide and seek. My class and I also has to wright about an experience we had. I wrote about a game of spotlight I played at a party.
Maybe next time you could try and use some similes to try and explain what it looked and felt like. How long ago was this? How long were you on top of the container? Keep up the incredible work Brennan!
I really enjoyed reading your story about your game of Hide and Seek. Sounds like you definitely found the best hiding place! Well done for winning! It is so much fun playing hide and seek with your friends. It is even better when you can play spot light at night time. I think all kids young and old like to play that! I look forward to reading more of you work while we are working from home. Stay safe in your bubble!
Hey Brennan, Kei te pehea koe? How are you enjoying Learning from Home? I enjoyed your Hide and Seek writing. It is more of a short descriptive story than a poem but that is all good. It is entertaining and definitely paints a picture. I could imagine you scrambling to get up on that container. Looking forward to reading your next post. And looking forward to seeing you again soon, Mrs Gully
Kia ora Brennan,I could imagine you playing Hide and Seek because you desribed it so effectively. There were many fun places to hide! I like your use of punctuation because this adds to the quality of your writing.
Hi Brennan,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from your school and class.
This is a very eye catching Blog Post.
It made me feel like I was you in the game thats how real it felt.
How do you feel that you were the winner?
There is nothing you need to work on.
Keep up the good work.
-Charlotte
Kia Ora Brennan. Emil here for T1! I really enjoyed reading all about this game of hide and seek. My class and I also has to wright about an experience we had. I wrote about a game of spotlight I played at a party.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could try and use some similes to try and explain what it looked and felt like. How long ago was this? How long were you on top of the container? Keep up the incredible work Brennan!
Cheers
Emil
Hi Brennan
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story about your game of Hide and Seek. Sounds like you definitely found the best hiding place! Well done for winning!
It is so much fun playing hide and seek with your friends. It is even better when you can play spot light at night time. I think all kids young and old like to play that!
I look forward to reading more of you work while we are working from home. Stay safe in your bubble!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Hey Brennan,
ReplyDeleteKei te pehea koe? How are you enjoying Learning from Home?
I enjoyed your Hide and Seek writing. It is more of a short descriptive story than a poem but that is all good. It is entertaining and definitely paints a picture. I could imagine you scrambling to get up on that container.
Looking forward to reading your next post.
And looking forward to seeing you again soon,
Mrs Gully
Kia ora Brennan,I could imagine you playing Hide and Seek because you desribed it so effectively. There were many fun places to hide! I like your use of punctuation because this adds to the quality of your writing.
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