Friday 13 August 2021

Shape Poem

A
Cool Creepy
Frightening Thing
Scaring people away
Terrifying nightmares
Creeping around 
Trying to be 
happy
 

3 comments:

  1. Hey Brennan,
    Hello Brennan it is Noah J from you class. well done on your shape poem it is very good. Maybe next time ad a photo of what you are describing other than that keep up the good work
    From Noah J

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  2. Hi Brennan

    Hope things are going well for you in your bubble! I wish the rain would go away so we could all at least go outside.
    Bet you would like to get out and kick a ball around.
    Thanks for sharing your poem with everyone. It is great to read your shape poem.
    Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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  3. Hi Brennan, I really like your poem, it's kind of makes me think that really scary things are just sad things going round wanting to be liked by people and have a friend! Have a great Monday, Miss J

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