Friday, 26 October 2018

Despereaux



Despereaux




Miss Tisdall wrote a sentence on the board and we had to think of 5-7 more sentences for it. I chose to write in the perspective of Despereaux t becuase it seemed interesting. I think that it turned out ok becuase I did it all and there was no mistakes. This is what I wrote:

The beating of the drum let them know that an important discussion would have to be made,one that affected the safety and well-being of the entire community. One mouse was in danger and it affected the safety of their family. Despereaux was in danger .He was however unaware that this danger was so bad. He was confused,about why he was in so much trouble. He thought he was clever and being a brave knight,that’s what the story said anyway.

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