I see a massive castle in the distance. I see birds moving quickly in the sky. The steam coming out of
the castle is forming big fat clouds.
the castle is forming big fat clouds.
I see a rainbow going over the huge castle. The trees are moving slowly in the wind. The sun is shining
and I hear the water moving fast through the trees.
and I hear the water moving fast through the trees.
This week in M3 we have been looking at different setting pictures and writing sentences about them.
I chose to these two pictures because they look interesting to write about.
I chose to these two pictures because they look interesting to write about.
They were very interesting pictures. We like your sentences, Nan and Poppa
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Brennan, My name is Honor I am a year 7 student in Totara 2 Grey Main School. I really like your post on Fullstops and capital letters. They are really interesting cool pictures. Maybe next time you could make sure you can read the writing because at the momment it is off the side.What is your favourite picture?
ReplyDeleteNoho Ora Mai.
From Honor
hi Honor thank you for commenting on my blog and next time I will do it.thank from Brennan
DeleteWhat up Brennan Callum here. I really like Your describing both of the castles. I like How you use your full stops and Capital letter. Here's a challenge see if. You can find my mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHello Callum thank you for your comment on my blog and I can't see your mistakes.goodbye Callum
DeleteHi Brennan its Franklin here from Totora. I really like your describing sentences. It is good that you are practicing your capital letters and full stops. Good work
ReplyDeleteThank you Franklin for commenting on my blog from Brennan
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